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Life

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You loved me,
I loved you,
Now you hate me
And I can't see
Through these tears of hurt and love lost
Stuck in an ocean of depression,
You were my boat in stormy seas,
Emotion blazin, Fury roarin,
I can't tell what anything is,
A hurricane of thought and feeling,
All of this brought upon by a couple of words from you;
You saved me,
I saved you,
But now you are the dagger in me,
Ripping out a piece of me,
I was your moon,
Reflecting the love you gave to me,
For 50 days and 50 nights,
You were mine,
I was yours,
You were the missing part,
From inside my heart,
Emotion blazin, Fury roarin,
I can't tell what anything is,
A hurricane of thought and feeling,
All of this brought upon by a couple of words from you;
You win,
I lose,
Is there a way,
To choose?
You loved me,
I loved you,
Now you hate me
And I can't see,
Any more,
Death is comin,
Yet I'm still runnin,
But I don't know,
How further I can go,
I don't know,
How much longer I can survive,
Emotion blazin, Fury roarin,
I can't tell what anything is,
A hurricane of thought and feeling,
All of this brought upon by a couple of words from you;
You loved me,
I loved you,
Now you hate me
And I can't see,
Any more…
this was written about one of my past relations
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SangerosNosferatu's avatar
It's incredible. So full of emotion....You have truly touched my heart and inspired me to continue my poetry.